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Twilight

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The day was yours
The night was mine
Until we met,
Now I find my heart and soul,
Ache at the thought of not being yours.
Through the day,
And through the night
It is you who is in my sight.
Thoughts of us as we once were,
A dire memory to be lost.
The world is ours,
Kneels at our feet.
Our love rules the night.
Our love rules the day.
Never again are we alone.
no idea...i just wrote

woohoo!! took me forever to get it done but i finally edited the typos :lol:
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M'kay, I saw the comment on a new title, no idea if it's still needed, but I still feel like sharing what I would've called it.
Which is maybe something like, 'Merged contrasts' 'From dawn to dusk' 'Eternal unison'
The second is more like a line to be used in the/a poem, so never mind that one.

As for the poem itself, me likes ^^
I like the whole picture, the whole concept.

I must ask though, as kaylstarr said, the poem reads:
"Ache at the though of not being yours"
Seems 'though' is meant to be thought
And your reply, about throughout, sounds a little weird =)
"Ache at the thoughout of not being yours"